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MrFijiWiji

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nice :D!

when it all came together it was a great song... you definitely have some great musical chops... you know what sounds good..and what sounds right
nice pads... they gave the song an eerie atmosphere
suggestions:
1. your intro was a little lengthy... now that doesnt bother me but other viewers on the site have a should attention span :/
2. some of your ur breakdowns where a little legnthy....

breakdowns give u a fresh start in ur song.... you can add a ton to it... make it sound exotic compared to the rest... which i love about it(only tricky part is transitioning it back).... but anyways in a breakdown add new unfamiliar melody to the song...

props for automation! i used automation for the first time on revival my first track... hahaha... it makes the song alot of easier to transition and sounds pretty sick :D!
well i really enjoyed this piece! and pm me every time u upload a new piece... ill 5 it right away(help protect you from 0 bombers!)

hope to hear more from you!

yeajimmiboi responds:

Thanks man :) I'm gonna try and compose another melody tonight. Thank you for your criticism. I can see what you mean about the lengthy breakdowns and intro. Thank you for commenting dude :) I'm gonna spend more time on this one. Thanks again :)

DOWNLOAD!

very awesome and inspiring... make me wanna kick some terrorist ass... lol like could haha...
can hear the emotion in this song and im digging it...
the synths are great....

yeajimmiboi responds:

Thank you very much dude :)

dont be shy!

-1 for:
1.BASS SHOULD BE PUMPINg.. not subtle! it should make the crowd jump!
2.for length... it was so awesome wish it was longer :D 3 minutes is good length to aim for

but u obviously no ur music! great lead.. nice gated synth... piano :D!!!
and come on 4 minutes is great amount of time for a song! dont be afraid to showcase ur work... its ur time that ur wasting not ours!
well have a good one :D!

yeajimmiboi responds:

Thanks man :) Before I put the full track up ill change the bass too be more bodied and full. :)

amazing

love the arp dude!
hope u get more exposure

A-New-Decade responds:

Yeah man, four years and still not much luck. Thanks for the review!

_anewdecade

hell yes!

amazing dude!!!!!
like the fx on the drum line....
nice sound fx
love the trance sweeps
maybe a kick on 1:06 and 1:18
lol thats really all i could suggest
and bring out the bass man!
btw really digging that synths slides up on octaves

georgem124 responds:

:L

Thanks for the support Fiji!

wow great man!

lovin it!
very hypnotic!
*downloaded*

agreed with below

everything was perfect
cept the hiss
and i finally found where ur sound fx is from!
is a preset on nexus
mite use it one my next ambient :)

KroweMusic responds:

Actually no. The sound effects that I use aren't from nexus, but some synths and pads that I use are, like the battlefield noises that you hear in this song. Thanks for the review!

so much better!

man i lovin this! going straight on my ipod!
would appreciate it if u vote on one of my songs again :)
thanks :)

jbarnett responds:

Done :)
And I'm glad this is more to your liking.

---jbarnett---

love me some ambient trance!

best type of music out there! and man did u represent the genre well!
*downloaded*

jbarnett responds:

Thanks man

TEAR IT UP!

thanks for the pm man ;)! i loved it. the intro did seem shorter. Love the snare. fits perfectly. Just i kept excepting a lead to explode out!!!!! annd everyone in the crowd to start jumping with hands in the air!!!! Just never came....its a good song :) and i downloaded. Just missing that lead....

jbarnett responds:

I would have played some chords at some point, but sadly, this synth doesn't quite work that way. I tried sliding it, but the sound just wasn't right. So sorry it never was just isolated and badass, but the badassness was drowned out by the kick and pad.

I'm glad you enjoyed it

---jbarnett---

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