nice :D!
when it all came together it was a great song... you definitely have some great musical chops... you know what sounds good..and what sounds right
nice pads... they gave the song an eerie atmosphere
suggestions:
1. your intro was a little lengthy... now that doesnt bother me but other viewers on the site have a should attention span :/
2. some of your ur breakdowns where a little legnthy....
breakdowns give u a fresh start in ur song.... you can add a ton to it... make it sound exotic compared to the rest... which i love about it(only tricky part is transitioning it back).... but anyways in a breakdown add new unfamiliar melody to the song...
props for automation! i used automation for the first time on revival my first track... hahaha... it makes the song alot of easier to transition and sounds pretty sick :D!
well i really enjoyed this piece! and pm me every time u upload a new piece... ill 5 it right away(help protect you from 0 bombers!)
hope to hear more from you!