GREAT!
the melody was excellent... very great feel for the vg genre
2 suggestions
1.while listening to the song i kept waiting for u to remove the filter on the snare
that didnt really happen
2.bring the bass line out more!
but i must say this is an awesome song.... love the arp like synth! was that custom? if so use it again in ur songs :)
20 dls already? nice :D